Rough draft of 1st essay
Many people have different kind of educational experience. Some
of the people think it is good, scary and some of them think it is fun. Getting
education are good but some of them just give it up. For my education experience
is scary and complex. Many people supported me on education but I develop
another education way for myself is that replace study to sports that I like
rather than just give up. People that supports, tells advice to you is good but
you really don’t know what the pay is for it.
The first day of my first class, I really think going to school is not my
type and I almost quit school but I met Ms. Rosita that time. She helps me on
study, life advice and also much advice for many aspects that really make me a
student. Since I met Ms. Rosita, I think I truly changed to another different
people. In the past, I really don’t care other people advice and don’t care what
others people think of me. But now I care, I really care what others think. In
my experience, in five years I change from “nada” to Prada”. I know that I can’t
study well so I develop another way to show off what I made of. I replace study
to sports and I need to training hard but I make it.
In my sport life, I met my best friend, See Hui and she influence me how
the way to live without study and we have common ideas or thinking. She is the
school best runner and I just a normal runner in the school but I really don’t
know that I improves so much and I really forget almost all the scary thing in
my life like study. It is fun when you have friend or common thing in school to
attract. I need to run three hours a day, do homework and workout almost every
time. I really tired but I will not give up and I will be the successful runner
in the school like See Hui.
One year after, I’m in the senior year I represent the school to
run. I really happy about it and I need to train every day until the day of
battle. I took the first place in the first time of my life because before that
I lose to See Hui. Now, I know that I can do better if I try it hardly. After
that I know that I can’t give up easily and do all my best for the thing I
want.
Rough draft essay 2
There were many conflicts between humans, themselves, nature and the society. Sometimes the conflicts can bring to death, to delight and sometimes lose something important in life. Conflicts are sometimes good or bad and it depends on what situation they happen. There were different kind of conflicts such as individual versus society and individual versus individual. In the society, many people want to pursue of their dreams but stop by the other people and the rules that they are following. In personal lives, people are greed to get what they want but need to sacrifice something to get it. The both of the stories, Galileo and Chicago the conflicts are similar and have differences.
In The Life of Galileo, Galileo is against the church and it means the society. He discovered the new things with his telescope and the new system that proved that the Sun is still and the Earth is moves but the church ignores it. The church thinks when the people learn the new things that mean people will forget about the past. In my opinion, I agree that people need to know more knowledge and open their mind to think about future and not stay in the past. Galileo trying so hard to make the church or the people to believe the truth but it is hard. Many people will try hard to get what they want but there will many obstacles.
In the Chicago, Roxie Hut is against another people to become famous. She tries the best to get what she want but failed. To be famous, she need to sacrifice her love to her husband and do many other things that will hurt other people’s feeling. Roxie killed a guy who lie to her and steal other girl’s idea about getting out from the jail. She also lied to her husband and the judge about almost everything. To get free and become famous by making other people feel bad and make sad to the judge for freedom. She does everything to be famous and can sacrifice everything she loved to be the best in the world.
In both of the stories, I think they have the similar and different conflicts. The differences between Galileo and Roxie are that Galileo use his knowledge to prove his research is rights but Roxie uses sacrifices way to be famous. In my opinion, both wanted to pursue their dreams but using different way to give it. Different people have different idea to pursue their dreams. The similarities between them are they use the way to prove people that they are rights. Galileo sacrifice his lives to do researches and Roxie sacrifice her love to be famous. So, I think that both of them have similar things to pursue their dreams by different ways.
In the conclusion, there many conflicts happening in the world and different people uses different ways to do or pursue it. Galileo and Chicago both are an interesting play and have differences and similarities about them. Dreams will come if you never give up and try your best to get the goals you want. Conflicts will happen anything and we really don’t know when it will happen. Many people sacrifice their life, property and love ones to get what they want in their future.
Rough draft for essay 3~~
In the United States, every four years the president will be elected and it has two different parties that involve. Every time when the presidential election, it will have a debate between candidates. Each president can only serve one term but some of the presidents will serves more. Different presidents have different policies of serving. The president needs to make sure that the people’s safety and can live peacefully. This year, Barrack Obama and Mitt Romney have a debate about who will be the next president for United States. In the debate, they are arguing about the different policies and ideas.
Every four years, the people will vote the next president for the United States but some of them don’t want to vote. People will think other people will vote so many of them will not vote. There have many parties in the United States; the people really don’t know how to choose it. Plus, many people also confuse who is better to them in the future. Many people have different idea of their next president. The people also arguing about the policies and ideas about their next president and them want the future will better. In the election, many people will elect the president or who they know better and will treat well.
In Obama’s policies, he will give the people have their own Medicare to make sure they can have their own doctor to medical assistance. In the health care, it can help many people and cut the budget of medical. The insurance plan can help the families to pay the medical assistance that are expensive and don’t worry about the debt or can’t effort to pay it. It also can help the children to see doctor and can be health. It also guarantees the future generation can get medical assistance and free medicine for any treatments.
In the Romney’s policies, he will give the benefits to the middle class people and the seniors. It is not fair to others people that are paying the taxes, and then it goes to the insurance that give to other people. But, Romney is against Obama cares because it is cost more than the traditional insurance. Each family has their health insurance and it is cost expensive for government. In my opinion, I think Obama care is more reasonable because it can help the families that can’t support their financial and can get their medical assistance for free. Many countries, they don’t have free medical assistance but the United States are different, they give free medical assistance and it can help the low- class people.
The economics in the United States becoming weaker; so many people can’t find any jobs and losing their jobs. The money goes to medical insurance and the people going to quit their jobs because of the benefits. In Romney’s policies, he disagrees with Obama because it will make the people being lazy, rising unemployed and make the people can’t find any jobs. In addition, many illegal immigrants come to United States for the benefits and get almost all the jobs and many people that are citizens can’t find any jobs. In my opinion, I think immigrants come to United States is good because in the past the immigrants build United States. So, people need to change their thinking about the immigrants.
In my conclusion, presidential election is up to the people believes and how they understand the president. Barrack Obama and Mitt Romney both can help the people in the United States but they have different policies and ideas of serve. The people will choose who their ideal president is and can make the nation better. Both of them against each other because they want to make United States more good and stable for the future.
Essay 4 draft 1
Multi- tasking is not harmless but different people have different thinking. Sometimes when you are busy, multi- tasking can help to cut down the task you have in daily. But, people need to control the task because it will damage the mind. So, people really need to think about the advantages and the disadvantages of multi- tasking. Multi- tasking has their limits on everything, so the people need to control their action with limits. The people need to limits what they do in daily. The brain will get damage when many things crash together. In the experiment at Sanford University, they tested two different group of different multi- tasking and it is proof that people can’t do too much things in once. One of the group, spending thirty minutes to do all the things and another group focused one task in ten minutes each. After the test, they were given a memory test. But, the one group that spending thirty minutes can’t do it. People will lose their concentration and to focus on things when you do too much things in once.
The advantages of multi- tasking are that people can cut all things to one and can do it more easily than one by one. It also can make people more relax and can get their mind relieves from stress. After finish everything in once, people can go hang out with friends, doing homework and listening to music can relieves stress and it is the advantages of multi- task. The disadvantages are people can lose their concentration when multi-tasking and don’t focus on other things after that. People can do anything after doing one by one without rest.
In my experience, I’m working in a bakery that is busy and I need to serves many customers at once. Multi- tasking helps me to serves customer faster and I can take rest after finish everything in once. In my opinion, I don’t think multi-tasking can effect or damage and lose concentration because people that lose their concentration is that he or she don’t know how to manage the time well and organize the things to done. After a long day of working, I still can go gym and do other things and I don’t think it will affect me after multi-tasking for a whole day.
In my conclusion, multi-tasking have their advantages and disadvantages. It is depends on people how they think about multi-tasks. People need to organize their time well in order to multi-task. If don’t manage well and after multi- tasking, people can lose their mind or concentration after that. All the things need to control or limit things in daily and don’t crash all in once.
Draft (number 2)
Multi- tasking is not harmless but different people have different thinking. Sometimes when you are very busy, multi- tasking can help to cut down the tasks you have in daily. But, people need to control the tasks because it will damage the mind. Many people do things differently and no people think about multi-tasking. So, people really need to think about the advantages and the disadvantages of multi- tasking. Multi-tasking has many advantages and disadvantages but it depends on the people how they think about.
The people need to limits what they need do in daily. The brain will get damage when many things crash together. In the experiment at Sanford University, they tested two different groups of people doing different multi- tasking and it is proof that people can’t do too much things in once. One of the groups, spending thirty minutes to do all the things in once and another group focused one task in ten minutes each. After the test, they were given a memory test. But, the one group that spending thirty minutes can’t do it. People will lose their concentration and lose focus on things when after you do too much things in once.
The advantages of multi- tasking are that the people can cut all things to one and can do it more easily than one by one. It also can make people more relax and can get their mind relieves from stress. After finish everything in once, people can go hang out with friends, doing homework and listening to music can relieves stress and it is the advantages of multi- task. The disadvantages are people can lose their concentration when multi-tasking and don’t focus on other things after that. Different people have different way to do their things but multi-tasking can cut down the jobs in daily.
In my experience, I’m working in a bakery that is busy and I need to serves many customers at once. Multi- tasking helps me to serves customer faster and I can take rest after finish everything in once. In my opinion, I don’t think multi-tasking can effect or damage and lose concentration because people that lose their concentration is that he or she don’t know how to manage the time well and organize the things to done. After a long day of working, I still can go gym and do other things and I don’t think it will affect me after multi-tasking for a whole day. But, different people will think and feel different about multi-tasking.
In my conclusion, multi-tasking have their advantages and disadvantages. It is depends on people how they think about multi-tasks. People need to organize their time well in order to multi-task. If don’t manage well and after multi- tasking, people can lose their mind or concentration after that. All the things need to control or limit things in daily and don’t crash all in once. Different people have another way to believe on the multi-tasking, multi- tasking sometimes good and bad to the people.
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/8/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 1
The world is creating equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without controlling by others. In the world there have many things will happen, but the people will never know what will happen next. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, there have many things that people can’t control and can’t get it in their life time. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In life of Galileo, he builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe on it. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truths but the community controlling by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and to success what he had done for the world.
In other book, inherit the wind\
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/8/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 2
The world is creating equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without controlling by others. In the world there have many things will happen, but the people will never know what will happen next. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, there have many things that people can’t control and can’t get it in their life time. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In life of Galileo, he builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe on it. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truths but the community controlling by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and to success what he had done for the world.
In other book, inherit the wind is about a teacher, Cates teaches biology about the Darwin’s theory to the class that are prohibited. He teaches his students that human are come from apes and monkeys according to the theory. It is wrong to tell that human are come from creature and not from the God. In that time, people think that learning new things are bad and it is harmful to the community. So many people in that time don’t know the truths and can’t against the God. In my opinion, I think people have the rights to believe what they believe and no one can stop it by threaten from others.
Both life of Galileo and inherit the wind, they have similarity and difference conflicts. Galileo convicted many people to believe him on the new system and try his best to prove to the community. In addition, Cates be accused to be guilt because telling the truths from Darwin’s theory and just telling from the book written in biology. Both of them trying to safe their life from dead but wanted to let the people know the truths that hide by the church. I think it is not fair because people need to know the truths and not hide them from the people. The world is not fair and it will never fair because no one is perfect and born perfect.
In the conclusion, the world is created equal but really not fair because it will never fair. People need to pursue the rights to know the truths and never tell lies. Many things will happen and no one can predict what will happen next. People need to appreciate what they have and remember what they got in life. In the past, many people sacrifices life for telling the truths to the people and people have to try the best to get what they want.
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/14/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 3
The world create equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without control by others. In the world there will happens many things, but the people will never know what will happen next. When failed, the people need to stand up and try their best to gain back what they fail. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People really needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the Life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similar and different conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, many things that people can’t control and can’t get in their lifetimes. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In Life of Galileo, Galileo builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe him. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truth but the community control by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything even his daughter, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and he tries many ways to raped off the problems that he faces. In my opinion, I think Galileo really tries many different way to proof his belief is right and his sacrifice is worth to the world now.
The other book, Inherit the Wind is about a high school teacher, Cates teaches biology about the Darwin’s theory to the classes and it was prohibited. He teaches his students that human are come from apes and monkeys according to the theory. For the church, it is wrong to tell that humans are come from creatures and not from the Gods. At that time, people think that learning new things is bad and it is harmful to the community. So many people in that time don’t know the truth and can’t go against God. In my opinion, I think teaches direct from the biology text book is not wrong because it proved before they wrote in the book. The people have the rights to believe what they believe and no one can stop it by influenced from others.
Both Life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. Galileo convicted many people to believe him on the new system and try his best to prove to the community. In addition, Cates was accused to be guilt because telling the truths from Darwin’s theory and just telling from the book written in biology. Both of them trying to safe their life from dead but they really want to let the people to know what are the truths that hide by the church. I think it is not fair to both of them because people need to know the truths and not hide the truths from the people. The world is not fair and it will never be fair because no one is perfect and born perfect.
In the conclusion, both Galileo and Cates try many different ways to tell the people about the truths that closed from the church and hide all the truths from people. People need to pursue the rights to know the truths and never tell lies. Many things will happen and no one can predict what will happen next. People need to appreciate what they have and remember what they got in their life time. No one is perfect and we need to make it perfect by ourselves because no one can help you to make any decisions or make you to be a perfect people. In the past, many people sacrifices life for telling the truths to the people and people have to try the best to get what they want. Nothing is late but people set up a due dates on everything that makes late.
Eileen Shaw
CLIP/QBCC
12/5/12
Mr. da Silva
Essay 6
Level 3A
Draft 1
Past is past it will never came back, many people don’t forget what
happen to the past and no one know what is the future will be. A person needs to
remember about the past and know how the past created. Also, people needs to
appreciate what the people before us do for our country before. Now, people have
the freedom is because of the past people sacrifices their life to make it
perfect for the future generation. When the world starts, it is blank and not
full with the resources and things we want. No one are born perfect and all people
started blank on the first time and people need to create memories or past to
remember.
People need to know how to find the way to develop without
destroying the natural phenomena and remains it as before. Because of the
freedom, people started to plan or think how to be free and taking high risk to
get what they want. To get something, people need to against the government or
other people that have power and making steps to fight. People can think and
know what is right and what is not right to
do.
In the history, the Europeans come to
the new world for the freedom of religion and free of monarchy. Creating a new
world needs resources but also need people to help to build houses, plant foods
and do other things for the new country. In a blank new country without
anything needs people to explore the land and find other people to get help.
The Europeans started to plan shipping or trade people from other countries to
help them on build the new world. The Europeans trade resources and for the
return is the slaves. It is called the triangle trade. In the trade, the
Europeans treat them unfairly
and inhuman during the way to the new world. They called them slaves, slaves is
a property and not count as a person to the Europeans. The new world now is the
United States of America but before that many people sacrifices life, spending
the whole life time to create a new world and making it a great
nation.
La
Amistad is a movie about trade slaves and against people that treat them
unfairly and bad.
Eileen
Shaw
CLIP/QBCC
12/10/12
Mr. da
Silva
Essay 6
Level 3A
Draft 3
In history, the Europeans come to the new world for the freedom of
religion and free of monarchy. Creating a new world needs resources but also
need a lot of people to help to build houses, plant foods, and do other things
for the new country. In a blank new country without anything needs people to
explore the land and find other people to get help on. The Europeans started to
plan shipping or trade people from other countries to help them on build the new
world. The Europeans trade resources and for the return is the slaves. It’s
called the triangle trade. In the trade, the Europeans treat them unfairly and
inhuman during the way to the new world from the original places they come from.
They called them slaves, slaves is a property and not count as a person to the
Europeans. The new world now is the United States of America but before that
many people sacrifices life, spending the whole life time to create a new world
and making it a great nation.
Past is past it will never come back, many people don’t forget what
happen in the past and no one know what is the future will be. A person needs to
remember about the past and how the past create. Now, people have the freedom is
because of the past people sacrifice their life to make it perfect for the
future generation. When the world starts, it is blank and not full with the
resources and things we want. It’s related to Cinque because he wants to get
what he want but block by others in the high rank in their society. To get
something, people need to against the government or the people that in higher
level or the people that have power and making steps to fight against. No one
born perfect and no one want the past happen again because it is very hurts.
People can think and know what is right and what is not right to do. In the
movie, La Amistad Cinque doesn’t have a perfect life and he fights it to be
perfect.
Cinque, who was a leader in Africa, leads other slaves and takes over the
Europeans ship. When they reach the United States, they are imprisoned as
runaway slaves. They faced many problems and can’t do anything because it is a
new place for them. Because of the freedom, people started to plan or think how
to be free and taking high risk to get what they want. They don't speak a word
of English and English doesn’t their first language, and it seems like they are
unlucky to die for killing their jailors. After that, they meet a lawyer that
decides to take their case, arguing that they were free citizens of another
country and not slaves for that.
In my opinion, I think that people really needs to know what they want.
Cinque is a good guy that takes lead on what they want. People can’t control
other people life and making them is slaves or a property. It is against the law
for now but in the past people can’t do anything for it. I think it is not fair
for Cinque because people have their right to choose their leader and choose the
life they want to be. To get what we really want, people will do whatever they
can to have it. Human is complex and they want to get they will try their best
to have it.
In the conclusion, it’s related to Cinque because he wants to get what he
wants but block by others in the high rank in their society. People need to
think about the past and how the past created to be the future. People are
complex and complicate; they need to think before doing anything that can
destroy your life time. The Europeans do something wrong about
the
past but they give us the independent so we need to think is before doing
anything wrong about.
Many people have different kind of educational experience. Some
of the people think it is good, scary and some of them think it is fun. Getting
education are good but some of them just give it up. For my education experience
is scary and complex. Many people supported me on education but I develop
another education way for myself is that replace study to sports that I like
rather than just give up. People that supports, tells advice to you is good but
you really don’t know what the pay is for it.
The first day of my first class, I really think going to school is not my
type and I almost quit school but I met Ms. Rosita that time. She helps me on
study, life advice and also much advice for many aspects that really make me a
student. Since I met Ms. Rosita, I think I truly changed to another different
people. In the past, I really don’t care other people advice and don’t care what
others people think of me. But now I care, I really care what others think. In
my experience, in five years I change from “nada” to Prada”. I know that I can’t
study well so I develop another way to show off what I made of. I replace study
to sports and I need to training hard but I make it.
In my sport life, I met my best friend, See Hui and she influence me how
the way to live without study and we have common ideas or thinking. She is the
school best runner and I just a normal runner in the school but I really don’t
know that I improves so much and I really forget almost all the scary thing in
my life like study. It is fun when you have friend or common thing in school to
attract. I need to run three hours a day, do homework and workout almost every
time. I really tired but I will not give up and I will be the successful runner
in the school like See Hui.
One year after, I’m in the senior year I represent the school to
run. I really happy about it and I need to train every day until the day of
battle. I took the first place in the first time of my life because before that
I lose to See Hui. Now, I know that I can do better if I try it hardly. After
that I know that I can’t give up easily and do all my best for the thing I
want.
Rough draft essay 2
There were many conflicts between humans, themselves, nature and the society. Sometimes the conflicts can bring to death, to delight and sometimes lose something important in life. Conflicts are sometimes good or bad and it depends on what situation they happen. There were different kind of conflicts such as individual versus society and individual versus individual. In the society, many people want to pursue of their dreams but stop by the other people and the rules that they are following. In personal lives, people are greed to get what they want but need to sacrifice something to get it. The both of the stories, Galileo and Chicago the conflicts are similar and have differences.
In The Life of Galileo, Galileo is against the church and it means the society. He discovered the new things with his telescope and the new system that proved that the Sun is still and the Earth is moves but the church ignores it. The church thinks when the people learn the new things that mean people will forget about the past. In my opinion, I agree that people need to know more knowledge and open their mind to think about future and not stay in the past. Galileo trying so hard to make the church or the people to believe the truth but it is hard. Many people will try hard to get what they want but there will many obstacles.
In the Chicago, Roxie Hut is against another people to become famous. She tries the best to get what she want but failed. To be famous, she need to sacrifice her love to her husband and do many other things that will hurt other people’s feeling. Roxie killed a guy who lie to her and steal other girl’s idea about getting out from the jail. She also lied to her husband and the judge about almost everything. To get free and become famous by making other people feel bad and make sad to the judge for freedom. She does everything to be famous and can sacrifice everything she loved to be the best in the world.
In both of the stories, I think they have the similar and different conflicts. The differences between Galileo and Roxie are that Galileo use his knowledge to prove his research is rights but Roxie uses sacrifices way to be famous. In my opinion, both wanted to pursue their dreams but using different way to give it. Different people have different idea to pursue their dreams. The similarities between them are they use the way to prove people that they are rights. Galileo sacrifice his lives to do researches and Roxie sacrifice her love to be famous. So, I think that both of them have similar things to pursue their dreams by different ways.
In the conclusion, there many conflicts happening in the world and different people uses different ways to do or pursue it. Galileo and Chicago both are an interesting play and have differences and similarities about them. Dreams will come if you never give up and try your best to get the goals you want. Conflicts will happen anything and we really don’t know when it will happen. Many people sacrifice their life, property and love ones to get what they want in their future.
Rough draft for essay 3~~
In the United States, every four years the president will be elected and it has two different parties that involve. Every time when the presidential election, it will have a debate between candidates. Each president can only serve one term but some of the presidents will serves more. Different presidents have different policies of serving. The president needs to make sure that the people’s safety and can live peacefully. This year, Barrack Obama and Mitt Romney have a debate about who will be the next president for United States. In the debate, they are arguing about the different policies and ideas.
Every four years, the people will vote the next president for the United States but some of them don’t want to vote. People will think other people will vote so many of them will not vote. There have many parties in the United States; the people really don’t know how to choose it. Plus, many people also confuse who is better to them in the future. Many people have different idea of their next president. The people also arguing about the policies and ideas about their next president and them want the future will better. In the election, many people will elect the president or who they know better and will treat well.
In Obama’s policies, he will give the people have their own Medicare to make sure they can have their own doctor to medical assistance. In the health care, it can help many people and cut the budget of medical. The insurance plan can help the families to pay the medical assistance that are expensive and don’t worry about the debt or can’t effort to pay it. It also can help the children to see doctor and can be health. It also guarantees the future generation can get medical assistance and free medicine for any treatments.
In the Romney’s policies, he will give the benefits to the middle class people and the seniors. It is not fair to others people that are paying the taxes, and then it goes to the insurance that give to other people. But, Romney is against Obama cares because it is cost more than the traditional insurance. Each family has their health insurance and it is cost expensive for government. In my opinion, I think Obama care is more reasonable because it can help the families that can’t support their financial and can get their medical assistance for free. Many countries, they don’t have free medical assistance but the United States are different, they give free medical assistance and it can help the low- class people.
The economics in the United States becoming weaker; so many people can’t find any jobs and losing their jobs. The money goes to medical insurance and the people going to quit their jobs because of the benefits. In Romney’s policies, he disagrees with Obama because it will make the people being lazy, rising unemployed and make the people can’t find any jobs. In addition, many illegal immigrants come to United States for the benefits and get almost all the jobs and many people that are citizens can’t find any jobs. In my opinion, I think immigrants come to United States is good because in the past the immigrants build United States. So, people need to change their thinking about the immigrants.
In my conclusion, presidential election is up to the people believes and how they understand the president. Barrack Obama and Mitt Romney both can help the people in the United States but they have different policies and ideas of serve. The people will choose who their ideal president is and can make the nation better. Both of them against each other because they want to make United States more good and stable for the future.
Essay 4 draft 1
Multi- tasking is not harmless but different people have different thinking. Sometimes when you are busy, multi- tasking can help to cut down the task you have in daily. But, people need to control the task because it will damage the mind. So, people really need to think about the advantages and the disadvantages of multi- tasking. Multi- tasking has their limits on everything, so the people need to control their action with limits. The people need to limits what they do in daily. The brain will get damage when many things crash together. In the experiment at Sanford University, they tested two different group of different multi- tasking and it is proof that people can’t do too much things in once. One of the group, spending thirty minutes to do all the things and another group focused one task in ten minutes each. After the test, they were given a memory test. But, the one group that spending thirty minutes can’t do it. People will lose their concentration and to focus on things when you do too much things in once.
The advantages of multi- tasking are that people can cut all things to one and can do it more easily than one by one. It also can make people more relax and can get their mind relieves from stress. After finish everything in once, people can go hang out with friends, doing homework and listening to music can relieves stress and it is the advantages of multi- task. The disadvantages are people can lose their concentration when multi-tasking and don’t focus on other things after that. People can do anything after doing one by one without rest.
In my experience, I’m working in a bakery that is busy and I need to serves many customers at once. Multi- tasking helps me to serves customer faster and I can take rest after finish everything in once. In my opinion, I don’t think multi-tasking can effect or damage and lose concentration because people that lose their concentration is that he or she don’t know how to manage the time well and organize the things to done. After a long day of working, I still can go gym and do other things and I don’t think it will affect me after multi-tasking for a whole day.
In my conclusion, multi-tasking have their advantages and disadvantages. It is depends on people how they think about multi-tasks. People need to organize their time well in order to multi-task. If don’t manage well and after multi- tasking, people can lose their mind or concentration after that. All the things need to control or limit things in daily and don’t crash all in once.
Draft (number 2)
Multi- tasking is not harmless but different people have different thinking. Sometimes when you are very busy, multi- tasking can help to cut down the tasks you have in daily. But, people need to control the tasks because it will damage the mind. Many people do things differently and no people think about multi-tasking. So, people really need to think about the advantages and the disadvantages of multi- tasking. Multi-tasking has many advantages and disadvantages but it depends on the people how they think about.
The people need to limits what they need do in daily. The brain will get damage when many things crash together. In the experiment at Sanford University, they tested two different groups of people doing different multi- tasking and it is proof that people can’t do too much things in once. One of the groups, spending thirty minutes to do all the things in once and another group focused one task in ten minutes each. After the test, they were given a memory test. But, the one group that spending thirty minutes can’t do it. People will lose their concentration and lose focus on things when after you do too much things in once.
The advantages of multi- tasking are that the people can cut all things to one and can do it more easily than one by one. It also can make people more relax and can get their mind relieves from stress. After finish everything in once, people can go hang out with friends, doing homework and listening to music can relieves stress and it is the advantages of multi- task. The disadvantages are people can lose their concentration when multi-tasking and don’t focus on other things after that. Different people have different way to do their things but multi-tasking can cut down the jobs in daily.
In my experience, I’m working in a bakery that is busy and I need to serves many customers at once. Multi- tasking helps me to serves customer faster and I can take rest after finish everything in once. In my opinion, I don’t think multi-tasking can effect or damage and lose concentration because people that lose their concentration is that he or she don’t know how to manage the time well and organize the things to done. After a long day of working, I still can go gym and do other things and I don’t think it will affect me after multi-tasking for a whole day. But, different people will think and feel different about multi-tasking.
In my conclusion, multi-tasking have their advantages and disadvantages. It is depends on people how they think about multi-tasks. People need to organize their time well in order to multi-task. If don’t manage well and after multi- tasking, people can lose their mind or concentration after that. All the things need to control or limit things in daily and don’t crash all in once. Different people have another way to believe on the multi-tasking, multi- tasking sometimes good and bad to the people.
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/8/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 1
The world is creating equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without controlling by others. In the world there have many things will happen, but the people will never know what will happen next. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, there have many things that people can’t control and can’t get it in their life time. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In life of Galileo, he builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe on it. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truths but the community controlling by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and to success what he had done for the world.
In other book, inherit the wind\
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/8/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 2
The world is creating equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without controlling by others. In the world there have many things will happen, but the people will never know what will happen next. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, there have many things that people can’t control and can’t get it in their life time. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In life of Galileo, he builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe on it. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truths but the community controlling by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and to success what he had done for the world.
In other book, inherit the wind is about a teacher, Cates teaches biology about the Darwin’s theory to the class that are prohibited. He teaches his students that human are come from apes and monkeys according to the theory. It is wrong to tell that human are come from creature and not from the God. In that time, people think that learning new things are bad and it is harmful to the community. So many people in that time don’t know the truths and can’t against the God. In my opinion, I think people have the rights to believe what they believe and no one can stop it by threaten from others.
Both life of Galileo and inherit the wind, they have similarity and difference conflicts. Galileo convicted many people to believe him on the new system and try his best to prove to the community. In addition, Cates be accused to be guilt because telling the truths from Darwin’s theory and just telling from the book written in biology. Both of them trying to safe their life from dead but wanted to let the people know the truths that hide by the church. I think it is not fair because people need to know the truths and not hide them from the people. The world is not fair and it will never fair because no one is perfect and born perfect.
In the conclusion, the world is created equal but really not fair because it will never fair. People need to pursue the rights to know the truths and never tell lies. Many things will happen and no one can predict what will happen next. People need to appreciate what they have and remember what they got in life. In the past, many people sacrifices life for telling the truths to the people and people have to try the best to get what they want.
Eileen Shaw CLIP/QBCC
11/14/2012 Mr. da Silva
Essay 5 Level 3A
Draft 3
The world create equal and people can do whatever they want to do in their life without control by others. In the world there will happens many things, but the people will never know what will happen next. When failed, the people need to stand up and try their best to gain back what they fail. Many people sacrifice life for telling the truths and explaining the truths. People really needs to pursue what they want and try their best to have it. In the Life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similar and different conflicts. People need to do what the right things that suitable for them and try the best to get it before too late.
Therefore, many things that people can’t control and can’t get in their lifetimes. Many people have different ways to get what they wanted. In Life of Galileo, Galileo builds his first telescope and proves that his system is right but many people didn’t believe him. Galileo did try many ways to get the people to know the truth but the community control by the church. Many people can’t do things freely and having a hard time during the period. Galileo sacrifice almost everything even his daughter, only to proof to the people what is the real world are. Galileo went though many obstacles and he tries many ways to raped off the problems that he faces. In my opinion, I think Galileo really tries many different way to proof his belief is right and his sacrifice is worth to the world now.
The other book, Inherit the Wind is about a high school teacher, Cates teaches biology about the Darwin’s theory to the classes and it was prohibited. He teaches his students that human are come from apes and monkeys according to the theory. For the church, it is wrong to tell that humans are come from creatures and not from the Gods. At that time, people think that learning new things is bad and it is harmful to the community. So many people in that time don’t know the truth and can’t go against God. In my opinion, I think teaches direct from the biology text book is not wrong because it proved before they wrote in the book. The people have the rights to believe what they believe and no one can stop it by influenced from others.
Both Life of Galileo and Inherit the Wind, both of them have similarity and difference conflicts. Galileo convicted many people to believe him on the new system and try his best to prove to the community. In addition, Cates was accused to be guilt because telling the truths from Darwin’s theory and just telling from the book written in biology. Both of them trying to safe their life from dead but they really want to let the people to know what are the truths that hide by the church. I think it is not fair to both of them because people need to know the truths and not hide the truths from the people. The world is not fair and it will never be fair because no one is perfect and born perfect.
In the conclusion, both Galileo and Cates try many different ways to tell the people about the truths that closed from the church and hide all the truths from people. People need to pursue the rights to know the truths and never tell lies. Many things will happen and no one can predict what will happen next. People need to appreciate what they have and remember what they got in their life time. No one is perfect and we need to make it perfect by ourselves because no one can help you to make any decisions or make you to be a perfect people. In the past, many people sacrifices life for telling the truths to the people and people have to try the best to get what they want. Nothing is late but people set up a due dates on everything that makes late.
Eileen Shaw
CLIP/QBCC
12/5/12
Mr. da Silva
Essay 6
Level 3A
Draft 1
Past is past it will never came back, many people don’t forget what
happen to the past and no one know what is the future will be. A person needs to
remember about the past and know how the past created. Also, people needs to
appreciate what the people before us do for our country before. Now, people have
the freedom is because of the past people sacrifices their life to make it
perfect for the future generation. When the world starts, it is blank and not
full with the resources and things we want. No one are born perfect and all people
started blank on the first time and people need to create memories or past to
remember.
People need to know how to find the way to develop without
destroying the natural phenomena and remains it as before. Because of the
freedom, people started to plan or think how to be free and taking high risk to
get what they want. To get something, people need to against the government or
other people that have power and making steps to fight. People can think and
know what is right and what is not right to
do.
In the history, the Europeans come to
the new world for the freedom of religion and free of monarchy. Creating a new
world needs resources but also need people to help to build houses, plant foods
and do other things for the new country. In a blank new country without
anything needs people to explore the land and find other people to get help.
The Europeans started to plan shipping or trade people from other countries to
help them on build the new world. The Europeans trade resources and for the
return is the slaves. It is called the triangle trade. In the trade, the
Europeans treat them unfairly
and inhuman during the way to the new world. They called them slaves, slaves is
a property and not count as a person to the Europeans. The new world now is the
United States of America but before that many people sacrifices life, spending
the whole life time to create a new world and making it a great
nation.
La
Amistad is a movie about trade slaves and against people that treat them
unfairly and bad.
Eileen
Shaw
CLIP/QBCC
12/10/12
Mr. da
Silva
Essay 6
Level 3A
Draft 3
In history, the Europeans come to the new world for the freedom of
religion and free of monarchy. Creating a new world needs resources but also
need a lot of people to help to build houses, plant foods, and do other things
for the new country. In a blank new country without anything needs people to
explore the land and find other people to get help on. The Europeans started to
plan shipping or trade people from other countries to help them on build the new
world. The Europeans trade resources and for the return is the slaves. It’s
called the triangle trade. In the trade, the Europeans treat them unfairly and
inhuman during the way to the new world from the original places they come from.
They called them slaves, slaves is a property and not count as a person to the
Europeans. The new world now is the United States of America but before that
many people sacrifices life, spending the whole life time to create a new world
and making it a great nation.
Past is past it will never come back, many people don’t forget what
happen in the past and no one know what is the future will be. A person needs to
remember about the past and how the past create. Now, people have the freedom is
because of the past people sacrifice their life to make it perfect for the
future generation. When the world starts, it is blank and not full with the
resources and things we want. It’s related to Cinque because he wants to get
what he want but block by others in the high rank in their society. To get
something, people need to against the government or the people that in higher
level or the people that have power and making steps to fight against. No one
born perfect and no one want the past happen again because it is very hurts.
People can think and know what is right and what is not right to do. In the
movie, La Amistad Cinque doesn’t have a perfect life and he fights it to be
perfect.
Cinque, who was a leader in Africa, leads other slaves and takes over the
Europeans ship. When they reach the United States, they are imprisoned as
runaway slaves. They faced many problems and can’t do anything because it is a
new place for them. Because of the freedom, people started to plan or think how
to be free and taking high risk to get what they want. They don't speak a word
of English and English doesn’t their first language, and it seems like they are
unlucky to die for killing their jailors. After that, they meet a lawyer that
decides to take their case, arguing that they were free citizens of another
country and not slaves for that.
In my opinion, I think that people really needs to know what they want.
Cinque is a good guy that takes lead on what they want. People can’t control
other people life and making them is slaves or a property. It is against the law
for now but in the past people can’t do anything for it. I think it is not fair
for Cinque because people have their right to choose their leader and choose the
life they want to be. To get what we really want, people will do whatever they
can to have it. Human is complex and they want to get they will try their best
to have it.
In the conclusion, it’s related to Cinque because he wants to get what he
wants but block by others in the high rank in their society. People need to
think about the past and how the past created to be the future. People are
complex and complicate; they need to think before doing anything that can
destroy your life time. The Europeans do something wrong about
the
past but they give us the independent so we need to think is before doing
anything wrong about.